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  Ian Pike at TVWC
  Ian, comedy, drama and animation writer, has 
  spoken at a TVWC on the subject of writing for 
  stage and screen. He is a full-time, freelance 
  writer with over 25 years' experience.
  After training as an actor at the Royal Welsh 
  College of Music and Drama, he worked 
  professionally on stage, TV, radio and in 
  numerous voice-overs. He then became a stand-
  up comedian working in clubs and on Live TV 
  before becoming a full-time writer. 
  
 
   
 
 
  Some years ago he branched out into production and direction 
  and he is currently in demand for corporate writing work. In a bid 
  to escape his desk, he frequently delivers workshops and 
  lectures on scriptwriting and drama across the world, 
  He has worked with students at a number of British universities at 
  both undergraduate and postgraduate levels and now travels the 
  world delivering teacher and student workshops and has 
  developed a series of online, screenwriting training.
 
  
 
  1.
  Come up with a spine that you can pitch in one line.
   
  Build foundations.
  2.
  Make sure that it has a clear beginning middle and end.
  3.
  Make sure you are then working with an idea for that
   
  particular episode and not trying to write an entire
   
  series in 60 minutes.
  4.
  Remind yourself what a story is. A protagonist with a
   
  clear goal and lots of obstacles in the way. See Pixar
   
  shorts for confirmation. 
  5.
  Now ask what the story is really about? 
  6.
  Take your characters on a journey.
  7.
  Make sure the stakes are high. Jeopardy. What do they
   
  stand to lose here? Life of Pi vs Eddie the Eagle.
  8.
  Do not start writing until you know where you might
   
  end up.
  9.
  Enjoy a love of big paper. Then cards. Then a scene
   
  breakdown.
  10.
  Grab your audience at the start.
  11.
  Read Save the Cat, Russell T Davies and watch Screen
   
  wipe s5 ep 3. And the script of Die Hard 3 for great
   
  action.
  12.
  Avoid clichés
  13.
  Hook your audience into the next scene, act and line.
  14.
  Give them what they want but not in the way they are
   
  expecting it. And make sure they absolutely believe they
   
  are not going to get 
  what they want at all at some point
   
  near the end.
 
 
  15.
  Cut out 80% of your dialogue. It’s all basically
   
  interrupted
   
  monologues. Forget your English teacher. See National
   
  Treasure.
  16
  Come in late / get out quickly.
  17.
  Subtext – much better to find out how your characters
   
  are feeling through what they are saying than doing.
   
  Show don’t tell and lie if need be.
  18.
  Who are your characters? Hot seat them.
  19.
  Make sure they don’t have unbelievable turning points.
   
  Stay true to them.
  20.
  Go through your scene breakdown and ask – what is
   
  the purpose of the scene? If your answer has no
   
  dramatic, 
  narrative, or character driven answer –
   
  rethink.
  21.
  Vary the pace. Think of a metronome. How can you get
   
  more variation?
  22.
  Go through and look at your action. Is it telling the
   
  story/dramatic enough/well written?
  23.
  Look out for and they all lived happily ever after
   
  endings.
  24.
  Backstory. Remember your story begins way before we
   
  join it. Think through everything that happened in the
   
  run up to us meeting your characters.
  25.
  Remember your medium. Is this really just a stage play
   
  with the word ‘screenplay’ on the cover.
  26.
  Get your hands dirty. Write from the heart and from
   
  experience. 
 
 
  
Ian Pike’s 26 rules of scriptwriting.