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Iain Pattison’s Tips
  Iain judged competitions for us for many years. During that time he has given us great feedback on how to 
  write for a competition. Below are some tips gleaned from his comments that we hope will help you to polish 
  your work
 
 
  
It’s a short story competition…
  …so try to avoid memoirs, monologues, poems etc. Have a plot with jeopardy, 
  dialogue, a chain of events leading to a conclusion, hopefully unexpected.
  Watch the word count
  Keep your writing tight, don’t waste words - especially when writing humour.
  Lights, Camera, ACTION
  Don’t spend half the word count setting the scene. Get into the action as soon as 
  possible.
  Maintain the pace
  Try to avoid interrupting the story flow with information dumps or back story. If the 
  reader needs information, keep it brief and relevant. And don’t cheat by having 
  characters tell each other information that they would already know.
 
 
  
One more tip…
  Although the above points are specifically aimed at entries for the Barbara 
  Olive Smith Memorial Trophy, which Iain has judged for us, they are probably 
  a useful guide for other events as well.
 
 
  There’s more from Iain on the Short Stories page.
  
 