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Iain Pattison’s Tips
Iain judged competitions for us for many years. During that time he has given us great feedback on how to
write for a competition. Below are some tips gleaned from his comments that we hope will help you to polish
your work
It’s a short story competition…
…so try to avoid memoirs, monologues, poems etc. Have a plot with jeopardy,
dialogue, a chain of events leading to a conclusion, hopefully unexpected.
Watch the word count
Keep your writing tight, don’t waste words - especially when writing humour.
Lights, Camera, ACTION
Don’t spend half the word count setting the scene. Get into the action as soon as
possible.
Maintain the pace
Try to avoid interrupting the story flow with information dumps or back story. If the
reader needs information, keep it brief and relevant. And don’t cheat by having
characters tell each other information that they would already know.
One more tip…
Although the above points are specifically aimed at entries for the Barbara
Olive Smith Memorial Trophy, which Iain has judged for us, they are probably
a useful guide for other events as well.
There’s more from Iain on the Short Stories page.